This is based on my site. Travel though Kanto collecting badges. The starters are Bulbasaur, Charmander and Squirtle.
Jamie was surfing on her surf board one day when she heard that Prof. Oak was giving out starting Pokemon to beginning trainer,"Wow, I can finally start my Pokemon journey," Jamie grinned. So, she surfed back to sore and went into her house,"Mom, I'm going to Pallet Town to start a Pokemon training journey," she told her.
"Ok, have fun dear," her mother told her. Jamie got out of her bikini, and got dressed. She then packed her things and grabbed her surf board and left. Once she got to the harbor she got on a ship that was heading to Pallet Town. She saw a lot of other trainers on board as well.
It took her about an hour to get to Kanto, then another hour to get to Pallet Town. Once there she got off the boat,"Now, where is Prof. Oak's lab?" She wondered. She looked around until she saw a big building with a sign that said Lab on it,"This must be it!" Jamie said excited. She walked up to the door and knocked on it.
Nottakenaway: Afternoon to you too, Tarlar! Yessssss finally wrote and posted that reply woot! Phew... it takes a lot of energy to rewrite a scene that was lost. I'm pleased with how it turned out.
Sept 17, 2014 6:52:44 GMT 11
Tarlar: Looks good Nottakenaway ^^ Though can you do me a favour and devide the text in smaller parts? Tou know in paragraphs, so it is easier to read. And unless you want to give Silver a free attack, I would suggest you to call out something..
Sept 18, 2014 5:23:38 GMT 11
Tarlar: It isn't sure I'm the one who is updating, but I don't think Silver is a person, who would sit back and give you a chance
Sept 18, 2014 5:24:08 GMT 11