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Post by sparky on Feb 21, 2012 17:25:20 GMT 11
Personal Information: Name:SparkyGender:FemaleAge:20Trainer Type::Newbie TrainerHomeTown:JhotoPhysical Appearance
She has blonde hair and hazel eyes. Shes on the skinny side and wears Mightyena ears and a detachable tail. Personality:Sparky is a fun loving hyper hyper person! She loves making new friends and is not shy just coming up and talking to you..Or joining in mid conversation just to be a part of it. Very active and loves to battle. Dont under estimate her. Shes not into cutie little pokemon as much as she likes a big strong Salamance or a Swampert! Don't be shy to come up to her...in fact don't she'll come to you.History:Grew up in a great family home never had any issues. Believe it or not she use to be shy and reserved until one day her mother grew ill and died which was a great impact on Sparkys life. She became very torn apart and she lived her live for a while in loneliness and dark. She hardly spoke to anyone and lost all her friends. But one day she saw a pokemone battle and the great friendship of Pokemon. To this day Sparky wants to become a Pokemon Trainer to forget the past and live everyday to the fulless.Goals: To become good friends with many trainers and to catch some of her favorite Pokemon that inspired her to become a Pokemon trainer. She wants to forget the past that she left behind and in hopes for a greater future.
Other Info:Likes/Chocolate,ENEGRY DRINKS,Anything shiny,Agressive Pokemon. Dislikes:Serious people, Poison,Bug Pokemon
How did you find us?: Google haha
Application completed: Yes________________________________________________
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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2012 17:43:24 GMT 11
Ah I'm afraid we can't accept the profile as it is. Rule 8 of the character rules covers this. Here is what you'll need to reread, the app is also there along with how many sentences are required for appearance, personality and history.
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Post by sparky on Feb 21, 2012 18:05:38 GMT 11
wow thank you! I was actually looking for this rule guess I over looked it xD Ill change that
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Post by sparky on Feb 21, 2012 18:19:49 GMT 11
Ah I'm afraid we can't accept the profile as it is. Rule 8 of the character rules covers this. Here is what you'll need to reread, the app is also there along with how many sentences are required for appearance, personality and history. Finished tell me what you think!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2012 21:52:27 GMT 11
Alright lets go down the list.
Name: Sparky will need a last name. Appearance: While you can augment your appearance with a photo, you still need to describe them within text form. As said in the rules you'll need two paragraphs with at least twelve sentences total. List height, weight. Go into detail how long the detachable tail is, or where it's connected to her outfit. List her outfit as well, it can change for each season as well. Personality: You'll basically just need another paragraph five to six sentences and you'll bet set. Go into why she wears the tail and ears, maybe why she likes Mightyena. History: You're going to need alot more, two paragraphs and twelve sentences more. Although you establish the basics, you could go into more detail. Could bring up her father, when she started wearing the costume parts, or other things
That's all that needs to be covered as per application rules.
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