Folemy Amenta,"Multiple Personalities"(done)

[Folemy]

Name: Folemy Amenta

Age: 15


Gender: Male


Trainer Type: Newbie


Hometown: Pallet Town


Appearance: Folemy is always in his full Japanese-style kimono set. The robes themselves are a deep purple hue, while his leggings are black. He wears sandals that are black with white socks that go up under his knees, and black arm guards. He bears three tattoos. Right arm: Bear. Left arm: Tiger Chest: Dragon. His hair is a dark purple matching his kimono and his eyes are a bit lighter than that. Strange for a fifteen year old to look like this, but certain instances caused him to rebel against his parents


Personality: Around others, Folemy very quiet, calm and calculating. He seems ruthless, but is really a very big 'softy'. He shows none of this side unless alone. When he is hanging with people he decides to be the one responsible one as well the person who keeps track of the others. Though he is still quietly observant, he silently worries that he will not be able to protect those around him.

While with Pokemon, there is more of a compassionate side of himself shown. He smiles a lot and is very playful with them. He'll roll around, jump and basically do what he can to have a great time with the creatures.

During battle, Folemy becomes one who looks bored easily. He yawns, and rolls his eyes, as if the whole concept of winning or losing never bothers him. Often times he'll turn his back on the battle, or talk to his Pokemon,ignoring the fact that the battle is still underway.


History: There isn't much to be said about Folemy. Other than at the age of ten years old he had decided to become a trainer. But at that age, his father had kept him from realizing that, and instead had him help at the family business. This business was to manufacture parts for things like Poke-Dex's and others like it. Folemy's father's work consisted of sitting in a stuffy office all day, filing paperwork. This was very boring as you can probably assume. And Folemy didn't stick around when he could help it.

Once he turned thirteen, he once again wanted to become a trainer, and would have, were it not for the Professor of Pallet Town running out of starter Pokemon, and he told Folemy it would be quite a while before there would be more caught. This event prompted Folemy's father to take him back to work with him.

This continued until Folemy's fifteenth year, and by then Folemy had been rebelling against his father, by dying his hair, choosing a weird style of clothing, and getting tattoos. Oddly enough his natural eye color was purple. During another boring day at the office, Folemy heard of more starter Pokemon being caught at the professor's lab. And snuck away to finally realize his dream of becoming a trainer.


Goals: To defeat the challenges of all regions.


Other Info: Folemy has the nickname: "Foly-Chan''


How did you find us?: Joey posted a link on Bleach Serenity

[Nada]

If Folemy's father was my father, he would've snapped his arms off for rebelling like that (he freak out enough when I just use highlights).

Anyway, there were some grammatical errors, especially in the field of sentence fragments. You weren't completing main ideas of a sentence often before splitting it up into smaller sentences. Periods are stopping points in sentences and to know if one is a sentence fragment, read things out loud to yourself and whenever you hit a period, take a good, brief stop and see if it sounds correct. The only other problem I noticed was the appearance being just a tiny bit too short, only by about 6 words. But I'm not going to split hairs there.

Overall, the profile still looks pretty good and I can see the effort in trying to follow our standards, so I'm going to say this profile to be ACCEPTED!

Go claim your starter Pokemon and put the URL to your profile here in your forum signature.

[Nada]

Inventory





Item: Poké Ball X4

Item: Great Ball X1

Item: Full Heal X2

Item: Revive X1

Item: Potion X3

Item: Map of Johto


TM/HM Case

~empty~

[Nada]

Pokémon in Party

Charmander
Name:Eirgoh
Gender: Male
Level: 5
Attacks: Scratch, Growl
Ability: Blaze
Nature/Personality: Disrespectful, in one short word this describes Eirgoh. He is much like Folemy himself, though without the multiple personalities. Although Eirgoh will carry out orders given to him by his trainer he will often times 'complain' about it. Making faces at his trainer as well as mocking facial expressions made by Folemy. He'll usually do anything to get on his trainer's nerves but when it truly matters, he can show directive to 'get the job done'.


Zigzagoon
Name: DarkEyes
Gender: Female
Level: 7
Moves: Tackle, Growl, Tail Whip
Ability: Pick Up
Nature/Personality: This zigzagoon hates when it rains, but strangely enough, loves to swim! There has not been any real explanation found on this subject other than the fact that DarkEyes loves a feeling of control. She hates not being able to choose when she gets wet, or sick, or hungry. You could say she's the drama queen of pokemon!


Pidgey
Name: Aero
Gender: Male
Level: 6
Ability: Keen eye
Moves: Tackle, Sand Attack
Nature/Personality: A stubborn little bird this one is. He never knows when to give in, no matter how brutally beaten he is, he never seems to want to quit. He could be bleeding with a broken wing, but he will still try to fight off anyone who would dare challenge him. This type of personality is what makes him and Folemy get along so well, they both have determination.




Pokémon Box

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